My final evaluation;

http://lucyeaston8.wix.com/evaluation

My final short film;

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My final poster;

My final review;

http://lucyeaston8.wix.com/review

Focus group;

I created a focus group for my short film, poster and review. I handed out the feedback forms I created and asked my peers some of the questions from it after. 

Focus group from Lucy Easton on Vimeo.

Improvements;

When I showed my film, poster and magazine review to my peers they gave me areas that I could improve upon. One of these was to add in more on the menu bar so that the website looked more official and I chose to do this with the same options on the menu bar as the Rotten Tomato website. 

Another improvement idea from my feedback was to make the knife in my poster have more of a glow to it looking like light is coming off of it and also to make the text bigger and the title a brighter colour to be able to read. I have decided to make the title bigger and brighter;  

I have also tried to give the knife more of a glow to it, I liked the idea of a light coming off of the knife but i thought it would stand out too much over the image of the girl and draw attention away from her. Although I have decided to give the image of the girl more of a glow to it using the 'neon glow' effect because I feel it could attract the audience more, as my focus group was of the age my film, poster and review is targeted at I have tried to change all the areas they thought could be better as I liked the ideas.

Also in my focus group my peers said that the title writing does not go as well with the film, looking more in to it i was able to find the text which my poster uses and replaced the text with that so that the texts link more.

I also added in a distribution company to finish off my short film and make it  more conventional and complete;

last draft short film (still need to add more starring and distribution);

The Rose With a Broken Neck from Lucy Easton on Vimeo.